After The Fall

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User: Merrick
After The Fall

A series of catastrophic events- a phenomenon most widely knows as The Fall -has left the world in ruin. After six years, locations have sprung up to do their best to bring order and authority back into society; Riverhollow, Gleamwood, Wolfsbane and Wildecrest. Outside the walls of these small civilisations lies the broken cities, the remains of the world lost, where savages reside.

 

Dayton Wilson, a Riverhollow resident, goes through his days in a blur; work, visit his brother in the hospital, sleep, repeat. Right as things are becoming too much and he's about to give up, he's approached with an interesting proposition to work for a company he hasn't heard of until now.

 

Though skeptical, he realises it's the only way to get his head above the water and help his brother. Unfortunately, he'll probably drown them both anyways.



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Gelöschter User

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Some grammar errors and typos here and there, but other than that, I love it so far. XD I feel sorry for Dayton thou. I could really feel his pain. ._. I can't survive three friggin' hours without food!! Amazing what some people would do to help their siblings.

Write more please, or I'll have to die of curiosity!! xD

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Merrick

Uuuuuuughhhhhhhh yes what I have in here is in dire need of editing, I'm so sorry to have put you through that. XD
What I was trying to do was just write all of it (I was aiming for 40k words) and then once I was finished and had the base all written out, I'd go back and fix... mehr anzeigen

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Faith.Raven

I'm going to guess you missed all your deadlines because were in May now and your were supposed to update in April xD
Please don't leave me hanging, I WANT TO READ MORE!!!

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Merrick

Heeeeehe. Depression's a bitch, Taco.
I have been wanting to write this lately, though. So I might try and get another chapter up, okay? =w=

Faith.Raven

Oh, I understand. Just take as long as you need. I haven't even started to think about Book 2 of our own series. I just want to read more :D
By the way thank you :p

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Faith.Raven

I need to make a new comment!!!!!

Read both chapter 3 and 4. Loved them! I Can already feel the tension building up I really can't wait to read more about Charlotte. She seems creepy yet I have a feeling that there's some hint of something else behind all that creepiness. :O

I feel so sorry for Dayton >.<
The poor guy has to choose between his life and his brother's. I mean how could you make a decision like that.

OVERALL... mehr anzeigen

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I love this book so much, and I can feel for Dayton

THAT BEELINE THO'

I can't wait for the updates to flood in, to get to the nitty gritty of this itty bitty book(y?)

And I will read the holy moses out of this book, so I can be named reader of the week at least once Q~Q (I love you faith, but I have to get up there once *sobs)

Merrick

It only goes downhill from here tbh. o-o It's getting worse, and I don't plan on doing any hardcore editing until after the entire book is written.

IT ONLY GETS WORSE, RAMI. RUN.

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I REFUSE TO RUN

I WILL READ THIS UNTIL THE VERY END

EVEN IF IT'S UNEDITED AND ROUGH, YOU CAN STILL SEE THE ARTIST START TO PAINT, YOU CAN TELL IT'S BEAUTIFUL, BUT IT'S NOT QUITE DONE YET o3o IT'LL BE BEAUTIFUL IN TIME, IT'S STILL PRETTY THO'

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Faith.Raven

1st April 2015- Today your book shall be updated and there will be words to read.

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Merrick

At some point, I need to describe what the frick frack Dayton looks like. XD I'm so bad at stuff like that. I'll get it in there eventually.

Ooh! Thank you for pointing that out! o: I still haven't edited, eh heh. But when I do, I'll make sure to fix that part! Thanks!

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Faith.Raven

Ah! That is difficult to describe the main character I don't think we described the boys till like when were well within the book o-o

No problem, it's better to get the ideas out on paper first then pick out all the small nit picks :)
I love cliff hangers myself, only when I'm the... mehr anzeigen

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Faith.Raven

I shall wait till you put words in this book.

I opened this book thinking about the cover and the blurb - which by the way were awesome- and then saw no words O.O

Lol keep me posted can't wait to read your first update ^.^

Merrick

Nono, nope, I'll just do something to my family, probably.

Oh my god. I showed this to my Mom and she loved it. XD
He looked so relieved when she said April Fools like "oh thank god"
That was amazing. Uuugh.

Faith.Raven

I loved this video so much. At first when she said "I want the first name to be April" I was like that's a pretty name then she said "Fools" I was like "epic moment!!!"

No doubt about it, this had to be the funnies thing i've seen so far.

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