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strange ,but completely unfinished :-/

an interesting story. I enjoyed reading it very much.

sorry about writing twice. I thought it never went the first time. Maybe I gave you two votes too, if that's possible.

I enjoyed reading this story. It was well-written, entertaining and yet suspenseful. I voted for you. Good luck in the contest.

I enjoyed reading this piece,it was entertaining yet suspenseful too.

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Travel Stories".

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