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i really like each of your stories - they are all different, and yet all well written and interesting. you have a strong voice and create clear pictures for such short stories.
I found a couple small problems that you might want to edit though :)
Hunter:
"metallic" shouldn't be capitalized
The last sentence should be "to be found they wouldn't" instead of "the wouldn't".
Flight:
You have a typo that says "used in emergencies, as I... mehr anzeigen
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