Resilience
Collin is stuck between reality and a nightmare and not being able to tell the difference.

Stichwörter: 
horror, nightmare
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four.oclock

What an ending. Really scary story and commendable writing :)

Enjoyed the read. Thanks :)

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paulashene

have you read 'Unwind' by Neal Shusterman? Your story has that feel to it....Paula

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peakdanece

I know..the wife created the ending. what she failed to understand is that i had the ending first and was building up to it. lol

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Rgabel

I have to admit (sheepishly) I read this a couple days ago and was confused by it. Today I really liked it!!! Liked the flow, liked the ending! Good job!!

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peakdanece

into a couple working together.

I wrote the story, she edited it, she didn't like the ending and changed it. I didn't like her ending, but we posted it because I didn't want to work on it again. Then a friend read it and when we pitched the different endings, she liked mine so we edited again, together this time, and we re-posted it.

Just goes to show that when you think you're thinking the same thing, it takes some more... mehr anzeigen

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