What an ending. Really scary story and commendable writing :)
Enjoyed the read. Thanks :)
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have you read 'Unwind' by Neal Shusterman? Your story has that feel to it....Paula
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I know..the wife created the ending. what she failed to understand is that i had the ending first and was building up to it. lol
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I have to admit (sheepishly) I read this a couple days ago and was confused by it. Today I really liked it!!! Liked the flow, liked the ending! Good job!!
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into a couple working together.
I wrote the story, she edited it, she didn't like the ending and changed it. I didn't like her ending, but we posted it because I didn't want to work on it again. Then a friend read it and when we pitched the different endings, she liked mine so we edited again, together this time, and we re-posted it.
Just goes to show that when you think you're thinking the same thing, it takes some more... mehr anzeigen
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and we forgot to mention that the dedication is to Bocaj (a real hero).
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