BookRix

just an awesome chapter! it was like reading a poem. i don't know how you get into that space, as a writer. i can do it a little, but you seem to be able to prolong it. i would be afraid to be in that space too long, so it is good to read something that doesn't hold back.

How shocking and how bleak! But written with a sort of savagery that gripped me. Can't wait to read more.

My goodness. Good writing goes that huh? It stabs and tugs, and turns quite unexpectedly. You held my hand, we danced, you twirled and twisted me, took me on a trip when I just want to sit and passively read. Then you poured water on a dosing art form. Writing will not go the way of jazz, not for me. Not anymore, not after reading this. The sharpest writing I have ever come across and aim to achieve. Beautiful!!!! Truly... Thank you for the profusion of inspiration!!!!!