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READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left because they were scared. But that night they all died because of their friend. He killed them for making him sleep in that house if you don't send this to 11 comments you will die tonight by Jerry. Example 1: A man named Stewart read this and didn't believe it. He shut off his computer and went through his day. That night while he was in bed he heard something outside of his door. He got up to look. And now he's dead. Example 2: a girl named Haley read this in the morning and she got scared but she didn't send it. She wanted to now if it was true. She went to school (She was only 13 years old) and that night she died. If you don't post this on 11 comments Jerry will 'visit' you his isn't fake. Apperently if you copy and past this to ten comments in the next ten minuets you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. You will either get kissed or asked out, if you brake this chain you will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. In the next 53 minuets someone will say I love you or I'm sorry

Very vivid. Great sorry

Awesome! I thoroughly enjoyed every part of that - it was so easy to read, and the flow was perfect and the ending....just awesome!

I loved the ending. keep it coming.

Holy cow! Great creep-out ending! The tension was built at exactly the right pace, and the writing is terrific! You should put together an anthology of your scary tales - I think you'd have a huge audience!

Please write more? [hopeful grin...]

I love the flow of this story, the jumps from pass to the present added to the suspense. Writing in the conditions of the landscape helped the mind's eye see things that weren't there that is , until that wonderfully scary end. I enjoyed this very much.

Very well-written short story. You have an extremely clear way of writing scene and dialogue, plus the way you staged the story in past and present added that little extra something.
I guess the moral is, "You can look, but you'd better not touch."
5 stars on this one.

As I read the story I started to form a question: Which comes first; the monster or the legend (Okay, like the chicken or the egg thing). The setting sets the mood which sets the imagination for the characters reactions to what they discover. Love the cultural references which adds a sense of an adventure they themselves may never go on but you gladly take us to.

So, now I know "What's the worst that could happen."