These poems contain wonderful images of winter and other seasons. Grammatical errors such as comma placement, spelling and spacing don't remove too much from these beautiful words.
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From page one I knew that you had the poetic style that I enjoy reading. Rhyming poetry has it's place - but it's in the prose and Haiku that you measure a poet's ability to connect their emotions to their pen and write honestly and completely.
You are a gifted writer and the Haiku really wrapped it up for me. I enjoy experimenting in different forms of Haiku and I read it with my fingers to make sure that the syllables are... mehr anzeigen
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thank you so much for your kind comments.
I enjoyed reading your "Warm coat of snow".
thanks again
Mark
thank you for reading
It was special for my son to point out the sunset and to experience it with him.
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I especially loved 'Humbling Sun of Winter' and the references to your son. Very well done. God Bless and good luck.
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Very Well Written!
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thanks for reading it.
there are more less frigid poems at opoetoo.wordpress.com
thanks again!