BookRix

This story enchanted me from the first page in, and left me feeling sick and almost enlivened. It was nice to read something truly raw and dirty. Lastly, the title Popsicle, awesome.. Thanks for this dark piece of beauty <3

When I began reading this story, I almost threw it out. I was thinking that this was the most gross thing I had ever read. The content sucked/ it was too xxxrated to be on the site/ the font hurt my eyes being too small/no cover/ Well guess what? when you brought the ant in (Muller)I suddenly got hooked into the story. This is probably the best i have read for a Sci-fi story. You have a real winner here and I commend you for it. I just don't know if I have the nerve to read the other one[kidding, of course]
Keep it up but please read mine. here is the link:---> I have written the beginning of a tale that is a character study tied
in to a fantastic story. I hope you read and vote if you like it./I
will do the same for those worthy./joeparente
http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-joe-parente-failing-well

Comments appreciated!

birthing a twilight story...

That was so weird....
Good though. And I knew it was gonna end something like that...well, not exactly like that, but I knew there was something weird with the ant. hehe I love this kinda stuff.
~L

Apart from the "few" 'F' words etc....the story is quite witty. You are a good writer, so maybe next time use that imagination of yours and write something romantic and post it in a contest.
Laz

Thanks a lot. I am going to try and get more stories up within the next couple of weeks.

Strangest story I ever read!!

I don't know to what Genre your story belongs. But, in a strange way I found it compelling. It kept my interest all the way through. The strange sentence structure fit with the strange story.
I liked it. I'm looking forward to your next instalment.

Below is my own personal scoring.

Originality=10/10
Imagination=10/10

Jack