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of your book - you need an X rating and I certainly can 'hear' these characters...good writing.
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I know what you're saying. I write about degenerates though and that's how degenerates speak.
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Mario,
Some books on this site have x-rated stamped across their front cover, maybe yours should too. You use quite a few f-bombs. While your writing style may require it, some people might be offended. This story has some words that might not go over well. Although, in my view your book might not have the same 'flavour' without them. What do you think?
Jack
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