Demonbane

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Demonbane
Lucas Trover was an orphan with no idea who his real parents were. Now adopted, he always seems to attract the wrong kind of attention, getting into trouble left and right. One day, that "trouble" comes in the form of something supernatural, rocking his world and flipping it over! Now on a race for time, Lucas desperately tries to unravel the secret of his lineage before it's too late. With the help of the beautiful Amanda and an annoying demon who keeps calling him "Master", will Lucas ever find out the truth?
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"Luke, you are a part of something bigger than all of us." he said slowly, "And one day, you could save or destroy us all."

  • Fantasy
  • 2290 Wörter
  • Ab 6 Jahren
  • 911
  • 10
  • Veröffentlichung: 06.08.2012
Stichwörter: 
love, hades, fiction, family, orphan, demon, awsomeness
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how adorable please update!!!!

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mangapanda
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mangapanda

Thank you angamonkey for your comment! :) I have actually written WAYYYY more, I just haven't posted it all up yet. I will try to as soon as possible!

angamonkey
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angamonkey

This had a very dynamic beginning, and I love how you described Satan and the energy about him before actually writing that he was the ruler of Hell. The imagery throughout the story was very good and the interaction between Luke and his adopted mother is really great. A few redundancies here and there, but apart from that, good story.

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