BookRix

Are you going to finish this book?

love the book

Wow!!!!!This is totally amazing. You have awesome talent.....

I like what I read (which was the first, second, and third chapters)! It definitely needs some work regarding mechanics and sentence structure. I think that a little bit of primping will boost it; maybe a bit more detail and the like?

I can't wait to see what this looks like fully edited. I'm certain it will be lovely, and you're doing very well for someone who's my age! (well, if you really are 13, that makes you a year younger... but whatever)

Would you be up for doing me a favor and reading a section of my latest project? It's rather long, so just Part One would suffice, but if you really want to, you can read it all. Might you be interested?

~Hannah

I have no idea what those people were talking about. I really liked this book. But I didn't see you switch pov.... So... What's up with this?

I read the first chapter so far and it seems you switch point of views a lot. That may be something you might want to clean up. Besides a few grammar/spelling mistakes that can be easily fixed it seemed like an overall good start. (:

~Cheyenne