You write well and I enjoyed this short but not so sweet nightmarish story. As others have said, it is very thought provoking, and you have made us all think. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future,
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Sad but also very true. A well-written thought-provoking story. Thanks for sharing this. :)
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madmilt
Thank you very much.
As I was reading I was thinking of my grandson who is deprived of love from his biological mother though the courts have him living with her. His salvation only in his step mom whom he embraces with a hunger three hours a week and every other weekend; but then, I am in the nightmare world my husband does not want me to put him into {and I won't}...I walk away with a heavy heart.
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And I certainly enjoyed reading yours, which looks like the winner per the vote count!
Did you actually have such a nightmare?
Keep writing,
Milt