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I love fantasies, and this one is starting out to be a very good one.
Keep up the good work, and let me know when you make updates. Please!!
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Thanx:) I actually realized the misspelling on the title when I looked at it this last time hehe. thank you for the tips and compliments :)
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I saw your post on the forum so i came over to your page to check you out.
I clicked on this one, so that i could get a sample of your writing and I think you are quite good.
I got a bit confused with who was saying what within the events on the first chapter. You must always put dialogue on a new line when the speaker changes:
For example you wrote about James looking in the mirror and then he turned. "You look lovely..."
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