Review - You spoke well of the mirror difference of hate and love. My favorite was the poem on death. You have written well of why death actually drives us forward. Loved the line about about not being worried about deadlines if there was no death.
There was only one word that caught me, but I think you were trying to say 'existence.' I struggle with spelling also, we all do, so not a big thing.
This was a great, little... mehr anzeigen
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These are poems that open the heart to different points of view.
Very good, Keep writing.
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