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I agree with Pat...the character should be defined a bit more.
Keep it up.
Laz
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I liked your teeney, tiny poem very much. It reminded me of my early years, way, way back when:)
If I could offer any suggestion, it would be to lengthen it a tad and tell us more about it.
Good job! Keep writing.
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