Specials

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Specials

   When Flash and her "family" is forced to run for their lives by the peculiars  they are faced with two options. Each with benefits and losses. Will they go to the government for help and expose their identity or will they run and hope that they don't get captured.  Find out what happens next.

 

This book is part of a series. I don't know how long the series will be, I'm just writing as I go.



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Lorian Lilsiel

Your story sounds like it's going to be a good one, just the standard stuff needs working on (spelling and grammar). Nothing everyone else here doesn't need improvement with. Zebras? Interesting... Any particular reason or did it just pop into your head when you were trying to think of something fast? You could go into more detail about their camp. Like, what they were eating, or what it looked like, how it was set up... that... mehr anzeigen

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Liza Cook

Thank you for your help. It's much appreciated.

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