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a great book but too short and the story never seems to end....

Dang this book is good.

I LOVE this book...... GOOD work

Very well done Liz. I hope to read more as you grow this story. Please
joeparente

I have written the beginning of a tale that is a character study tied
in to a fantastic story. I hope you read and vote if you like it./I
will do the same for those worthy./joeparente
http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-joe-parente-failing-well

Comments appreciated!

Although this is not a genre I usually like, you wrote this so well that you kept my attention throughout. Very impressed with your mastery of sentence structure and grammar...and your storyline is gripping. I look forward to reading more of this story.

Hi Liz. Sounds good to me. Great with punctuation and Grammar. I couldn't find anything that made me stop and feel like taking notes. Refreshing to find work where care is taken with these details. I look forward to reading more from you.

If you have a spare minute I have a story entered in the Get Published contest called A Hunter's Journey. I'd love to see what you think. If you find anything you don't like, feel free to point it out for me. All comments are greatly appreciated.
Denna
http://www.bookrix.com/_mybook-dholm1_1291162049.9144439697

hey, i really liked this!!! The setting reminded me a little of Eragon by Christopher Paolini! I really liked it though!

The start of a promising story,left me wanting to know more.

Thank you. Glad you noticed the "forward". I always spell that word wrong. Yes, his brother's name is Freed. I just thought it would be an interesting name. :)

Good start. Liked the setting. Can't wait to see what that stone represents.
His brother is called "Freed" ?
One small spelling mistake...page 5, 'foreword' should be 'forward'.

Laz