BookRix

Thats a good poem. It flows really. The desires of people can be brought out as dream form, i feel it's a healing proccess to not pursue things that are a distant probability in the waking world. Liked it alot.

Thank you so much! You guys have such kind words! Poetry gave me my start and that's where I learned to put my heart into it. Hopefully it's transferred into my novels as well. Thanks again!

You are so gifted with rhythm and rhyme. Love the meter of this poem. This is the type of poetry I was taught in school and I love a good solid rhyming poem. This let's us have a peek into the longing of love. Beautifully done. Robynn

Dreamlike and sensuous.

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