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They just bring a natural enchantment woe to angel read it aloud it's flow is off but bravo. I look forward to more

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Thank you very much for spotting those. I admit i knew the power of a kiss had a strange flow. But i did not notice the miss use of words in "I Used to have this dream", it was the correct spelling in the wrong context, and i have made the punctuation changes to "Ask me Not". I greatly appreciate you taking the time to tell me about these things and i hope you come back and read some more later. :)
~Lions.Dream.In.Gold

I do agree with Paigecarter on how deep your messages are and I rather enjoyed A power of a kiss. However, I want to give a straight answer: I used to have a dream has some misspellings, A power of a kiss flow doesn't flow in the last chorus, and ask me not much just punctuals missing. I hope this helps and doesn't discourage you. Sorry for stepping on your toes but it's really good.

I'm so very happy that you enjoyed what you read. This book is something that I will be constantly updating as i develop my work. Thank you so much for reviewing and I do hope that you will come back to read some more.
~Lions.Dream.In.Gold.