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Luvly story hope you wil finish it though i really enjoyed it
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Hey Lilly, you write so, so well. I'm intrigued by the direction you plan to take in the writing. Your character seems perfect at this beginning stage, too. I'll continue reading. Great job. Oh, on page 1, at the end of the second paragraph...think about changing "to" to "too" :)
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lilly
I love that, amazing
you are a inspiring person
felixthecat
:)
You are a fine writer. Keep moving forward, even if you have to stop for a minute and take a breath.
lilly
=)
thanks
i'll try
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This is the book you told me about!!!
I am so freaking excited to read it!! <3 XD
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Thanks for the kind words.
I'm going to try to work on it soon.
---lilly