The Ferryman

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The Ferryman
Dante turned a prettier phrase, but I have a better sense of humor.

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death, humor, religion, mythology
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mcharlene

Oddly, the first time I read this I did not read the last page. I am glad I reread it.
I delight in your work.

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rebekahjennings

Hi Leslie,

Very interesting story. I like your take on things, maybe they're not so evil after all.

Some of the dialogue tags aren't necessary. E.g.: "Perhaps I'll do something terrible to you for defying me," Charon bullied. By reading this sentence I get a sense already that Charon is threatening and behaving in a bullying manner. This makes your dialogue tag reduntant. You can show the reader 'who' is doing the talking by... mehr anzeigen

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lovingempath

Definitely one of my favorites Leslie (already have it saved).

Will be back to read more of your stuff soon...looks like you've been busy!
Good luck in the contest!

Robin

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briandoswell

. . . a long, overly drawn out joke but its none the worse for it. I wondered if the Health & Safety boys were about to demand hard hats for all on-site/riverside workers. So that's where Walter went.

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joeparente

This is my second read of your book. I must admit that i didn't read it close enough the first time. I did this time and found it extremely well written. You have a talent for writing such an unusual story. I have voted a star for you as well as the one that counts./joeparente

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lesliethompson

Thank you Joe, that means a lot. I really appreciate it.

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