BookRix

It was a very beautiful book.
And thank you for writing it <3
with love \sakura

very good flow with plot, transitions from chapter to chapter with out loss of clarity. I would enjoy reading more of your works, keep writing.
Thank you
Mari

I really enjoyed the story Leslie! It was a bit long but really good, kept me coming back for more. I liked your ending. My only real complaint is that I found there was too many characters; it was hard to keep track of them all. I might do a review on this book in the Book Reviews group. :)

Didn't see all that coming! Wow! How wonderfully horrifying - your descriptions were awesome. I could see everything, and almost wished I couldn't. Very, very effective.

I sense a conclusion coming and can't wait to see where you're taking this now. All kinds of possibilities are clamoring for attention, and I'm sure you'll get it exactly right - you have so far! :D

I was wondering how Shaw was going to handle this one...nicely done. As usual, your descriptions were stellar - enough to show the surroundings, people (or reasonable facsimiles thereof), and the situation without slowing down the flow of the story itself. Wish I could do that, grumble, grumble. And yeah, there was the occasional typo, but nothing you won't see with a quick read-through. The plot, as they say (whoever "they" are), is continuing to thicken! Aha! Watson, where's my...oh. Sorry. I was watching Sherlock Holmes a little while ago. Ahem. Yes. Okay! I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. =D

Ha! I love where this is going! And now it's my turn to lmao - you certainly know how to turn a phrase! Write more, write more!

Okay. I'm going to read this as if I were just following a television series, and having seen this week's episode, I'm simply waiting for the next one. If I don't do it this way, I'll end up tearing my hair out in frustration...well, no, that would really hurt. Still, though...right. Okay! This story just gets better and better, and if I may channel a teenager for one moment, OMG! Can't wait for Chapter 17!

Come to think of it, this really would make a great tv series (based on the movie, of course). :)

Ohhh, can't wait to read what's coming next!

this just gets better and better