BookRix

The weight of this is in the clarity of its rush of words and the hardness of its conclusion.

Nicely tied head-to-toe.

This is great, but without reading the title, there is no object in the actual sentence. Can you get 'Miner' in there somewhere, I wonder?
Wendyxxx

- very true..

My dad was a miner. Died of 'blacklung'.

My dad was a miner. Died of 'blacklung'.
Sorry, double clicked. You can erase.

Love your entry Leslie, it's very clever.

Just a heads up,the link in the contest seems to be broken...had to go to your profile page to find it.

Carol x