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Lesley,This is a wonderfully told memory and it makes the reader almost feel and smell the things you experienced!! You have a very real talent for writing!!!

Want to go there for one day to taste the bubbly ghee and jasmine rice! Good job!

This story is richly textured and full of evocative detail. Lovely.

This short story did a wonderful job in capturing the emotions in that short moment in time...feelings almost being tangible...palates tasting all the wonderful foods being described.

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Thanks, lovingempath. That prompted me to read your story, and I thought it was beautiful and deserved my vote.

cool...my button works again..:) Voted!

ah...there it is :)

...I'm not seeing it here. Maybe it will pop up in a second. I'll check back for that also.

All the wonderful visuals--the smells--the things you touch, and the emotions you convey, are remarkably well placed in this tight piece of literature.
I'm trying to vote for you but it isn't registering. I'm checking into that with the bookrix. people. I'll be back. Good luck! :)