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Its New year and one of my New year's resolution is to try my best to finishing this book so expect several chapters that will be posted immediately probably each week > _<

Whoa Leandra, this was awesome!
You wrote it beautifully & I liked the description :)

You have an interesting perspective. I've been reading your other work, too, and because of the way you do scene descriptions, I have a feeling you'd be an excellent script writer. Books rarely use the same technique as a screenplay or stage scripting, so it was a little disconcerting at first. But then I continued as if I were in fact reading a script, and found myself enjoying this and "Return to First Love" in that context.

There are spelling and grammar errors, but I know a lot of writers prefer to get their story out in written form first, and then go back and make those corrections, so this isn't a criticism - I just assume you're going to do that. The important thing, though, is that you have a nice way of allowing the story line to flow in and around itself, keeping the reader's interest.

I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for sharing it with us!

I am sorry but I am still currently working with this second story for the series "Red String of lost Love". First part of the story will be posted immediately after I am done :)