BookRix

I'm not quite done yet, actually. Stay tuned!

Thank you for the nice comments. I have added a little bit more for those who are interested and will continue to add more later on!

I like the story line and the plot, but I think you could have more of a beginning story and a more detailed climax and a nice closing. I liked it though. I know you could do alot with this. You made it suspenseful though.

NICE!! love the names :)
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