I like where the story is going, I haven't been able to real thought it all, but minus the editing part I think the story is great so far. At least what I read anyway. I'm going to put this one in my favorites. I hope you don't mind.
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I love your cover and your blurb sounds really interesting. Can you please make the editing changes that Laz suggested and then let us know so we can come back and read your book!!!
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My suggestion is to follow Lazarus67 suggestions. And make paragraphs and double space them.
It may be good, but how it's formatted it is very hard to read.
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Please, please punctuate your sentenses. I can't tell where one starts and finishes. Use upper case where needed. This is a writing club, so good grammar is stressed. If you need help, there are many here who can lend a hand...to a limit.
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I spelled sentences wrong, didn't I ...lol.