Although there needs to be more, and it is hard to write a story in full for a contest that has limited words to the stories, I enjoyed this. It was a very cool story.
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This is strange. Incoherent. I can tell it was written quickly. "Beat the clock" style. It needs to be elaborated, because I was confused. It started one way and then skewed into another tangent out of the blue.
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Strange...of course. Incoherent....hmmm, don't think so. Written quickly, "Beat the clock style" ...yes it was. At least the first part. The second part is definitely not finished. I'm still working on uniting the two parts. But not too soon.
Great start to this story. I can't wait to read more. :)
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I found this to be a great story, and one you could expand on. Sorry you didn't win the contest too.
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Now you have us hooked on the dual stories, you should be beavering away, writing the next chapters in the saga! I certainly hope you are!! Where you you get this stuff? It's great!
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Close Lenora....it's a high powered rifle, like a deer gun. I had a 300 magnum...stronger.
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Oh now I really like 30.06 (like the shotgun?). I want to hear what happens to her and Isaac!
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Thanks Judy.
It seems as if there are two separate tales here. It will be fun to see how I can unite them.
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Please continue this! I love the concept, and your sci-fi detail is wonderful. Like Ken, I thought about how identical twins had to be the same gender, but like you, I've known several sets who, despite the gender difference, were nearly indistinguishable except for hair length and an Adam's Apple. So I suppose twins can be outwardly identical regardless of their actual status.
Anyhow, I really like this and hope you keep... mehr anzeigen
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