BookRix

still cant get over ur hilarouis face

Love the title

This is a very unique story! Are you going to finish it? You should!

"Plump with my blood, they struggled, yet managed to exit through my bedroom window and out into the still night."

vampires. lol.

I really liked this one. Very intrigueing... now... FINISH IT BEFORE I BEAT YOU WITH A STICK!! lol.

As always, Laz writes with lyrical beauty - not caring if it is a desirable woman or an intoxicating mosquito..vampire....it matters not. An elegantly penned story that is somewhat out of the ordinary, placed upon a beautiful backdrop of stationery. I always enjoy your poetic and sensual words, Laz, and you have not disappointed with this one.

Reveiw - A fanciful flight of imagination on the wings of solid writing. You have come far my friend, from your first efforts.

Of course you have captured the heart of every male's desires and wrapped it in an engaging story. And added to it your own special sense of humor. Really, mosquitoes? LOL

Wonderful job. Robynn

Just like King Solomon,p. Thanks Tanya.

Couldn't put it down, had to go reading it to see what happens. Nice work, i think you captured the dream of every men on this planet, to have so many beautiful 'things' just for you.

**To be continued** This story deserves more. It was very entertaining, I am happy to see you are broadening your horizons. So far the moral to this story is "Read the Fine Print" the insertion of the comedic aspect in several places was executed perfectly.
I did notice a few mistakes but I know how hard it is to see your own. The writing and concept was more than enough warrant over looking any mistakes.
Its also hard to build a world and we readers would like to know more about what it looks like and smells like, what sounds are different if any. If you ever want to flesh this out more that would be a good avenue.
Everyone loves a good vampire story and you have intrigued us with this one. I will certainly be waiting for book 2!