The Sanctuary of the Vampire Mosquitos

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The Sanctuary of the Vampire Mosquitos
Not all vampires are what they seem to be. And not all vampires are scary and mean looking. Find out what our hero Vlad discovers when he goes back to Transylvania...to his roots.

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Gelöschter User

still cant get over ur hilarouis face

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Gelöschter User

its like scary

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dreamthief

"Plump with my blood, they struggled, yet managed to exit through my bedroom window and out into the still night."

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stormstar1

vampires. lol.

I really liked this one. Very intrigueing... now... FINISH IT BEFORE I BEAT YOU WITH A STICK!! lol.

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gooduklady

As always, Laz writes with lyrical beauty - not caring if it is a desirable woman or an intoxicating mosquito..vampire....it matters not. An elegantly penned story that is somewhat out of the ordinary, placed upon a beautiful backdrop of stationery. I always enjoy your poetic and sensual words, Laz, and you have not disappointed with this one.

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Rgabel

Reveiw - A fanciful flight of imagination on the wings of solid writing. You have come far my friend, from your first efforts.

Of course you have captured the heart of every male's desires and wrapped it in an engaging story. And added to it your own special sense of humor. Really, mosquitoes? LOL

Wonderful job. Robynn

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Gelöschter User

Couldn't put it down, had to go reading it to see what happens. Nice work, i think you captured the dream of every men on this planet, to have so many beautiful 'things' just for you.

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yezall

**To be continued** This story deserves more. It was very entertaining, I am happy to see you are broadening your horizons. So far the moral to this story is "Read the Fine Print" the insertion of the comedic aspect in several places was executed perfectly.
I did notice a few mistakes but I know how hard it is to see your own. The writing and concept was more than enough warrant over looking any mistakes.
Its also hard to... mehr anzeigen

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