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Actually, to be saved he only needed to have enough faith to cut the rope and fall to the soft grass below.

A very touching story on the concept of "Faith."

Wow.. you did wonders with such a short story but those words would "hang" long in readers minds!!! Perfect ending. I feel god told him to Cut the rope to not suffer the Cold bitter end... 5 stars

A well thought out story with an ending that makes you think, "What would I have done!

Review - I was waiting for one of your humorous twists, instead got a heck of a moral! You have the omniscient voice down very well. Excellent job! Robynn

It sounds like an excerpt from a sermon, but it was a good story. thanks.

Sometimes we need to let go. Good story.

To get to the bottom of things (pun intended), let me just say that I like it!

Love this story. You made it your own. Although sad I had to laugh at the end. I enjoy reading your books especially the dark humour which seems to pop up every now and then. More please

Thanks. If the opportunity or theme ever presented itself, I would also present this as a sermon in a somewhat shorter version perhaps.