BookRix

Thanks.

that was soooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks Mel...maybe I will.

plz tell me you are wrighting more?? IT's to short anda good start.. :)

Mel*_*

Happens all the time

wow its a great story :D i loved it. It was really poetic in a way.

but I fell in love with the words. Real; is how I would best describe it.

Ah unrequited love! Always bring up so many questions! Excellent setting, wonderful descriptions. Once again a brief glimpse that tells a whole story. Excellent Job! Robynn

nice one.

Thanks for that comment...I might just develop that story...who knows?