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Lovely Laz. I 've never loved so much that I lost myself in someone else, but I knew women who did. Your depiction of this woman's struggle was actually how they described. Empathic indeed.
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this is a very emotional book and i enjoyed it but its so sad that people get abused. your a very good writer. I wish abuse was something that did not occur in life. thanks for this book though it was a great book you should write more.
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Wow... the emotion you portrayed on this piece was just amazing and lovely. It touched me so, I too have felt like this before. And it almost brought me to tears when I was reminded of such feelings. You are a true writer and poet. Loved it! No doubt it will go to my favorites.
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Lazarus, your writing is so real; so full of emotion. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to your next essay.
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Your story was very sad and touching.She loved someone so much that she lost herself.I was glad there was hope in the end, from a higher power. This was very well done. Serena
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very moving Laz.. i wish more women had her strength.
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Sometimes you outdo yourself with your poignant insights and the results in words, Laz. This is one of those times.
To convey the agony of another in writing, especially a character of the opposite sex, can come off as juvenile in the hands of a novice. You have shown your true talent as a fine writer here.
Yes, the ending is uplifting and appropriate to the theme.
So well done!
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Thanks Pat, this coming from you is a real honor.
Yes..thanks Glynis.
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