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How clever. If you had not added that one word at the end I totally would have been left in the dark. Great job with the imagination and hiding the reality of the characters' world.

This is cute - I loved it. The ending was a great surprise.

Laz,

I love this cute story. Also, I got in a good laugh too. Surprise ending!

Great writing!

Indie...yes there is.
http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-lazarus-the-coffee-house-incident

I really enjoyed the story, but I wanted more. I think it would be even more interesting if you extended it. It was very well written. :)

very good read, and laugh. Great job on this. keep it up.

I just had to read the "first" adventure before I went on to the Coffee House Incident. Glad I did.

Thanks Val...I was thinking about that.