The Coffee House Incident

or the further adventures of Amos and Andy Von:
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indie23

I found it quite interesting and funny. I would have liked more on the twins though.

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Rgabel

Not only are you humorous but you walked on the side of Satire in this one! Be careful Laz how you incorporate those you know into your imagination. Someday they may return the favor! LOL Would have liked to see more through the eyes of Andy and Amos. You changed voices in this one, bad Laz! LOL Great read as always! Robynn

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bluedragon

so I sam in at the deep end here. It was weird, and as someone else said wacky, I could ot follow it all but...I liked it. It was fun, nutty, but fun. EWell done Evelyn

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briana44

As always, great job Lazarus! I loved the point of view of Amos and Andy the ants. Great short story!

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gooduklady

Love the Aussie lingo you inserted. Very clever of you. Perfectly edited and now a real contender!! (LOL). I am loving the way you have incorporated your BR pals in this book which makes it really come alive. Way to go, Laz!

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yezall

The ants are at it again! You are great at comedy and you make us all laugh. Plus you mentioned me in the story, what a sneaky way to get a heart!! But hey, it worked!!

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