THE OLD PUMP

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User: lazarus67
THE OLD PUMP
Darkness, confusion Illusion

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mysterywriter723

That was a very compelling story, Laz. I didn't expect the way it turned out. I was thinking maybe he was just dreaming or hallucinating. You're very crafty and wily, like a fox.

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totallytennantmad

WOW! Now that is one brilliant story. I loved the vision, the confusion and the darkness of the piece.

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lazarus67

Thanks...I told you that you would.
You'll like LOVERS and PLAYERS....but it's not so dark...yet it has your kind of twist.

lazarus67

Thanks...I told you that you would.
You'll like LOVERS and PLAYERS....but it's not so dark...yet it has your kind of twist.

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Gelöschter User

good imagery. strong title.

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lazarus67

The end just jumped out at me.

Thanx Brandon

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lazarus67

The cover is a picture I took outside a hospital, when I did deliveries there.I don't know who she was, but she looked sad sitting outside in the sun. I always look for chances to take photos.

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Donna.Ure

I really liked it, surprising twist at the end I wasn't thinking that at all :P

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lazarus67

I was surprised too
That's what I love about writting....you never know what's around the corner even though it's you who is at the steering wheel.

Thanks

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