- very good...Paula
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A warning to all to watch their drinks at all times.
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That was a very compelling story, Laz. I didn't expect the way it turned out. I was thinking maybe he was just dreaming or hallucinating. You're very crafty and wily, like a fox.
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WOW! Now that is one brilliant story. I loved the vision, the confusion and the darkness of the piece.
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good imagery. strong title.
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The end just jumped out at me.
Thanx Brandon
The cover is a picture I took outside a hospital, when I did deliveries there.I don't know who she was, but she looked sad sitting outside in the sun. I always look for chances to take photos.
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I really liked it, surprising twist at the end I wasn't thinking that at all :P
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I was surprised too
That's what I love about writting....you never know what's around the corner even though it's you who is at the steering wheel.
Thanks