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Lazarus,
You have written a very touching and inspirational story. Scarlett's unconditional, self-sacrificing, undying love is so inspiring. The surprise ending really touched my heart.
Exceptional Writing!
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I loved this story when I read it earlier...came back to re-read and cast my vote.
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Good job. Descriptive yet short... enjoyed it a lot. For some reason I figured out the twist before I got to the end though. :)
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A cat! I never thought of that. You gave even a two page story an unusual twist.
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Well done! Haha :) The first sentence kind of confused me but it was all up hill from then on!
I could feel the smoke engulfing my lungs and the cries of my loved ones as well as the crackling of the ferocious fire consuming everything around me.
I don't know why, but I had already assume the character you were describing was a cat! Pretty funny, but it made me smile when you revealed that little bit of info.
Amazing job! You have my vote :)
---RbG
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This shows the depths of a mother's love. I have a cat who recently had five kittens. I couldn't help but think of her. I voted.
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I officially love it. No wonder you pressured me to read it. YAY!!! CUTE AND FLUFFY!!! (I won't say what it is because that would ruin the surprise.)
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