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This tale has quite a unique development. After she's broken his nose and bruised his shin, he finally admits he's teasing her. Ouch! He must be a sucker for pain! Lol! Twisted romance, yet somehow romantic in the end. Nice work.

She is a very skeptical woman...maybe she needed a prove of his love...wonderful story...Mari

I like the character you have come up with, a very vivid story that i can picture every move she makes. I enjoyed it...

Ps...I like Samantha, I think that I'll write more with her in my next story or stories.

Thank...means a lot to hear such nice comments...I can't change it because I posted the story in PDF...so it has to stay...but thats alright.

Ok, great night life descriptions, could actually see the scene, smell the smoke, and got a good grasp of the spirit of Samantha! Ending had a great comedic flow to it! Felt like I got punched also by it! LOL

On page 7 add 's' to Samantha makes her way to bar. Couldn't help that! The editor came out in me! Really like it Laz! You have a definite sense of humor!
Robynn

Thanks Paula, God created variety, and I'm merely one tiny creation of His.

me - many spokes to that keyboard {not a misspelling}...Paula

So sorry to disappoint you, pal...lol
Maybe next time, I'll make it more to your liking.
Thanks