That was not fair! How do you just play with my emotions like that and expect me to be okay with it?!
Such simple yet beautiful words to describe what one is feeling. if only we could do this in real life instead of over thinking it.
Lamb-like skin.... That was my favourite line. It made me re-evaluate my life.
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Please, continue caressing our little hearts to beat wildly with passion and creativity. I honesty refuse to forgive you for this!
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You lyrically defined "Lost in Love". Beautiful.
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I was lost in a rythmic, poetic trance, as I read this. Very, very lovely.
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This poetic prose,flows as smooth as a quiet, albeit deep, running river.
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This book is resplendent throughout with breathtaking beauty. The dialogue is playful between the two leads. The narrative description is expertly captured onto your writing canvas, with the settings that are painted. Awesome work, Laz! I nominate your great book for the wildcard.
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I have just been made aware of this piece of yours. It is so lyrical, Wonderful descriptions of a dreamlike universe where etherial love abounds. Such beautiful descriptive prose is just my cup of tea. Well done (and may I add, I was able to make it larger, yea!), Bluedragon/Evelyn
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Thanks for realizing that one CAN touch a dream.
And Tink, I love the way you compared my story to music.
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I love music as much as I do reading and reading that story was like listening to a beautiful song. It flowed with such romantic elegance. Thank you for directing me to it.
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you can touch a dream. But you can. Lazarus came back to vote on your gem. Will find the place. It must be but tail spin from Mars.
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Love you too...lol.