I wasn't quite sure about this at the beginning, but that ending sealed it. It was funny and spooky at the same time. Well done.
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Lazarus,
I came back to vote. I wish you the best in the contest.
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A great example of flash fiction with a zing for an ending.
And since this was a flash fiction contest and this was great flash fiction, I guess you just zinged me for another vote!
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Wow, Laz, that was great. You never fail to impress ;) I was in disbelief when it just finished like that, I was frantically turning the pages to try to read more. A great ending for a great tale, by a great writer.
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What a mysterious, cute short story. It's a great read, and the ending is a bit scary. Well done and goodluck.
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Really nice ending. I found myself running around my head, trying to find out what happened.
Good job, I have some serious competition :)
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Laz,
I love the book cover and this very mysterious and touching story. It is scary too. Great job!
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Oh...a comment!!!?? Thanks...lol.
Ha ha I'm not that cruel