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Disappearing is very touching. Great work!

So lovely, so sad, and I hope I never experience that with the love of my life.

Your writing is always touching and possesses sentimentality. I sense a certain longing for closeness in your poetry. The way you depict emotions is so deep in its scope. Thanks for showing us your world.

Thanks, sadly it true. I've know a few. and there's one we read to and not ten minutes later she has forgotten most of it. I'm 64 and I think sometimes I'm losing it. I forget movies and stories I've read, till I'm way into them.

Very touching Laz. I really felt for the couple.

you are a true artist you paint a picture with your words like no other could

Aww.... brought tears to my eyes... Well done Laz. X

Brilliant

Your poem made me remember my friends who brought meaning to life, but not in touch now. Disappearance can be painful to loved ones. Thanks for sharing this poem.

Plz read the poem that started me writing this. I give Serena the credit.
Click on this link.Or cut and paste.
http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-serena-axel-evaporating