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WOW! This is so passionate! I loved this poem! I could feel the intensity of the words and their meaning. Amazing job!
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I found this to be a supurb writing, and do hope this is the way it will be when my boyfriend and I move in together!
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Sweet, romantic poetry as it should be. Beautiful.
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Tender, charming, full mof loving endearments. I like the recurring themed first line of each verse, Evelyn/Bluedragon
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Sweet, lovely, and very romantic! All the simply pleasures of romance.
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Thanks Tonya and Judy.
True, this one leaves out most of the over-flowery honey-dripping babble....so unlike me...lol.
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I love the unadorned tenderness, the poetic caress of words - you've captured the invitation to enjoy a simple, warm, blissful sharing of honest love. One of your best, I think.
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Wow Lazlo,
Beautiful, touching, romantic and all that.
Exceptional writing!
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