Such a beautiful piece, with a truly ageless poetry style.
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This sounds like a tribute to your lovely wife. Written so elegantly and descriptively. Blended perfectly through the usage of metaphors and similes, which you are a master at using. Excellent piece of art!
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Really beautiful Laz... I love it!
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indeed to have a poetic heart for a love...Paula
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Obviously you have experienced smiling eyes that have captured your heart! Beautifully poetic and realistic.
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Thanks mom, you are the best.
Laz
Just kidding, Val, my friend.
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You are indeed an artist, my friend, in more ways than one. You can write poems, fairy stories, short stories, winning drabbles, take photos, do graphics.....such a talent.
Love the poem. Val
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thanks Serena
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I liked it very much. Very nice cover jacket. Serena
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"In my old age, should my windows become dim and the shades be pulled down low, I would(will ?) never forget the vision of her smiling eyes,.....
What a beautiful sentance, Laz. Congrats!
Jack
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Thanks Jack...mercifully....I'm not there yet.
Laz
Thanks...I almost forgot I had this one. Been a long time since someone read it and commented.
I was browsing and chanced upon this one. Glad I did :)
Maybe if you wish, and since I have so many short stories, I can recommend a few.
Sure :)
http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-lazarus-erinmore-and-the-lost-children/
You might like this one...if you haven't read it already