please update its so good!!!!
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The idea of a street racer is pretty cool, but I think you need to show the main character actually racing to show how awesome she is. It's show vs. tell.
Here's some advice from Maria V Snyder, author of the Poison Study series:
A common writing mistake is to tell the reader the events of a story or tell the reader how a character is feeling. Journalism is an acceptable method of telling, of presenting the facts, but fiction... mehr anzeigen
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Please continue! You are a great writer!
xoxoxoxo
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Great job!! Please let me know when you update, I can tell that it will be a GREAT story if you keep writing! xoxo
Eva
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time writing a book i think that's a pretty good start. you know you have great ideas but there are a few errors if you correct them then i don't know why you won't get more fans.and one more thing write more, not like a summary if you understand what i mean.
other than that i LOVE this book. well done. can't wait for more^_^
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