Under the Summer Sun

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Wine, Beer & Cocktails

The majority of the popular minority who voted for Trump knew exactly who and
what they were voting for and a minority of that minority did not care so long
as there was an ""R"" next to the name. Trump is a product of electoral
politics and Republican cynicism and it all worked because a majority of the
voters in this country in key states did not do their jobs. Trump is an object
lesson in the failures of... mehr anzeigen

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very well written and interesting.
Turned into a real action explosion!
Great.

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littlel

I love the book. I think It's very creative and unique and I don't mean to change your book, but I have an idea that might help.
I think you need to add more interesting details to the story to add up to when the guy takes her. Then you could leave it a cliff hanger and write another.

Again I liked the book and I don't mean to change it, but I hope you will find this information helpful, not hurtful.
Little L

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Fist, let me make some casual observations.
Great Font!
Great font size (very bookrix friendly)
Great layout and grammar. Very good writing style. It flowed naturally and was easy to read. The story was interesting right from the start, but it ended so quickly. With large font size your few pages are like a popcorn in a bag - the words take up a lot of volume but there's not a lot there.
Great start, but where's my horror I... mehr anzeigen

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sakurahime1234

Thanks! I started writing this story at 11 last night and so far I've only gotten the begining, but there will be horror! I promise! Its going to start a little slow at first but we'll get there! By the way, thanks for commenting and favoriting my book! It means so much to me!... mehr anzeigen

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sakurahime1234

Hey, this is my 2nd book called....Under the Summer Sun!
It's a horror but ik that its not scary at all so far...but just wait! I think the story will be pretty scary >:D

Anyway, hope you guys like it!

<3

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