BookRix

the book was so so so so soso so so sosososo perfect and i like it so much that i would give it a reviwe that would make it the number 1 book in the whole universe
that you will be the 1st richest person in the earth

This was good but a little confusing. Why was Thorn punnished? What, or where was noland? Where was she when Samuel found her? You mentioned a mud floor, which indicates a hut or cave, but offered no other insight as to where she was. I'm sorry if I sound rude or mean, and I'm even sorrier for the horrible apology... =,(
Setting the flaws asdie, you've got the beginings of a great story here with strong characters and an imaginative story line. I can;t wiat to see where you go with this, if there is more to come that is, and I can't wait to read more of your work! =)

Amaizng cant wia tfor the update :)

this book was okay