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This is the story of my life, all it needs is a soundtrack and an Oscar.

Lazarus, "Tonight I Sail", a very touching poem. Very good work as usual.

To late...it is often to late...bautifule wort's

O! To read what he has to say on the other side!

The poem is cleverly written and easily relatable, I especially enjoyed the ending starting with: Silence embraces me. I would say it is similar to a couple of my poems, but not one in particular.

Very good! It gave me a sense of freedom letting go! Thanks for the share!

This is insightful. It truly captures that feeling of just wanting the pain to end.

I love reading your poems, even though they are sad.

For a moment there was hope...I was saddened by the course chosen by--or for--the soul, though. Seems he gave up just when the moment arrived that would have lifted him back to life. The defining moment; the footstep that once taken cannot be reversed. Sad and powerful through your images.
Nice job again, Laz.

Oh what a wonderful writing Laz, I find my myself on the edge of my seat when I read this!