The Way

A Surreal Journey of Discovery Von:
The Way
"I saw an old man fall, and as I reached for him, someone stepped on his face and kept going, leaving a trail of blood quickly added to as a mass of legs pounded the poor man into a pulp. He never made a sound."

A young man loses his family and through his surreal journey to find them he discovers a magical and dangerous side of life he never knew existed.

This story, is not just based on a dream I had, but is pretty much directly taken from the dream. It was so vivid, that I had to write the gist of the dream down as soon as I awoke, and then I went back later and wrote the details. Constructive criticism is appreciated. This book is certainly not x-rated, more like PG-13

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  • Veröffentlichung: 15.12.2011
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Magic, Science, Demon, Lost, Dream
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reading this well done work, pictures and words begin to build some imaginations that I could also find in your brilliant paintings.

larkinlivesay
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larkinlivesay

Thank you jendaz0, I really appreciate it. I do want to continue. I wrote it a few years ago, after a dream, and set it aside. I guess life got in the way. I would like to make this into a graphic novel, maybe. I appreciate the feedback, and I will look at your work, and try to do the same. Take care, Larkin.

jendaz0
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jendaz0

The story kept me captivated, I wanted to read more. Very well written, full of imagination. Novel in the making?

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