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This book is bassically Pretty Woman only a gang leader instead of top bussiness man :/

Love your story, i hope you are thinking of finishing it,

Hi really good book can't wait for more. Way to pull me into ur book and the character in the I can't wait to see where u take them.

its a really good book and i liked it so ummm can u please add more

I will continue don't worry i'll try to update my story
I'll try everyday to update at least one chapter

You have a wonderful writing voice for such a young age. You have developed good conflict right from the start, pulling your reader in, making them want to read further to find out how things are resolved. You have given your main character a fiery nature tempered with a heart. I would suggest you continue this story. As with all beginning writers, you need to also concentrate on spelling and grammar. You are doing a good job with conversation and sentence structure. Pay attention to things like "Kicked Out" not "kick out". Good job, you definitely are talented. Robynn

its got a really good start u should finish please cant wait to read more **

It was really good!!! I can really understand the main character. And the way her life is. You should write more. It's a good start. :)

I read it...it's good so far.. but you got to add more...more excitement....more fun....but overall it was really really good...I liked it! :D