Love n Prosperity

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Love n Prosperity
Angelit is a published author,while enjoying her success, she is signing books and meets a friend. Through their friendship she meets Anthony, a very wealthy man who owns his business. Their journey is one of love,tests, and trials, but they endure and live happily ever after in this compelling page turner.

  • Fantasy
  • 1796 Wörter
  • Ab 0 Jahren
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  • Veröffentlichung: 30.03.2012
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love, friendship, prosperity
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Review - You have the framework for a very interesting story here. The start was a little choppy and I had to go back to re-read to track with it.

You posed a possible problem with the step-daughter, but never followed through with it.

Your little poetry snippets were quite cute.

I like your voice, it is strong in this 'narrative' styled story. If you are interested, I have suggestions, but I'm just an avid reader, not an... mehr anzeigen

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