nice poetry saving it to my favorites right now!
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I really love it AND as everyone knows I love happy endings too.
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Thanks a lot, the messages that I receive mean a lot to me. I'm just glad that some people like my writing :)
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Laura, this is marvelous! The way you structured your poem...the initial longing, the build up and then resolution...but especially the repetition of the the bark's characteristics. So excellent:)
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I liked it for its simplicity, the beginning, the middle and its finality.
Keep up the good work, fill our lives with your verse(s).
Don't ask, you know already.
Cauldar.
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